Early Demo track, Could Use some Feedback

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    • October 25, 2011 at 10:01 pm
    tjchep
    Member

    Whats going on guys,

    Let me start off by saying this is an EARLY demo, Vocals are a bit meh, and not sure on the melodies either. Guitar tones are not where I want them really and the mix is OKAY at best. Still havent recorded a bass part either lol That being said, if you guys could tell me what you like, love, dislike, and hate it would be very helpful! Any and all comments welcome and very much appreciated.

    http://soundcloud.com/tim-chepeleff/closure-demo1

    Thanks again guys,
    Tim

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    • November 9, 2011 at 7:02 am
    tjchep
    Member

    Here is an updated demo on “Closure.” Working on alot of tracks atm with my drummer. Still need a bass part… and a bass player but let me know of what you like and don’t like so far.

    .. and sorry for the miserable timing on the chorus guitars, havent fixed them yet -__-

    http://soundcloud.com/tim-chepeleff/closure-demo-2

    Thanks guys. TJ

    .. and hey! if you guys like what you hear like us on facebook. we’re not public yet, and have a tentative name of the breed, but when we upload finalized stuff and go to the studio it is going straight to the facebook.

    http://www.facebook.com/thebreedmusic

    • November 13, 2011 at 9:20 am
    Ti-Ti
    Member

    Nice song in a Genesis daughter style :). Appreciated

    • November 14, 2011 at 3:09 am
    tjchep
    Member

    @Ti-Ti 12888 wrote:

    Nice song in a Genesis daughter style :). Appreciated

    Not sure what you mean by Genesis Daughter style. Couldnt find any song by Genesis named daughter lol… Thanks for appreciating it though!

    tim

    • November 15, 2011 at 3:06 am
    Sean Conklin
    Sean Conklin
    Member

    Hey TJ,

    Crazy potential here man. While it’s an early demo I can hear what kind of song this could become. With a voice like yours I think you guys could go really far if you solidify a band and pump out some rock solid songwriting.

    Songwriting-wise, I really dig some of the mellow melodies here, excellent chill music. I did feel some of the transitions seemed a bit cut up and could use more flow. In lots of cases I think it’s good to try to make transitions not seem too much like actual transitions. They should be there to keep the flow going, or sometimes they aren’t needed at all. Also 1:50 to 2:15 seemed to lose momentum. Wouldn’t mind hearing a short but sweet guitar solo from you in this too.

    Mix-wise, I’m just on a laptop, but from what I heard the vocals dominate the mix way too much, drums also sound super thin.

    Keep at it though and get your demos sounding as pro as possible. Thanks for sharing TJ and keep posting updates! I wanna know when you hit the big time. šŸ˜‰

    • November 19, 2011 at 6:00 am
    tjchep
    Member

    Thanks alot Sean, alot of good feedback in there. All of it in noted and has been though about! you’ll see a more finalized version of the song sometime next week!

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