Hey JB, š
Some really nice ideas! š Smoking technique (sweeps & bursts.) I also like how you mixed “space” into your phrasing (I need to work on that!!!) Anyways, the only thing I could even add that perhaps you could maybe improve on, would just be some more harmonic variety, and perhaps less repetition on some of the specific sweep and burst-licks (although they were very cool!) BTW, kudos to you for using an relatively (and appropriately) “clean” tone here! I think that a “creamy-distortion-type” tone could work, but I think you’re cleaner tone was better and more articulate! š
All-in-all, you did an excellent job here JB! Keep up the good work bro! š
~Bill Meehan~