Jimmy, š
Well done. I like how you used space between your phrases (I struggle with that! :o) I think you might be able to develop your vibrato and bending technique even more (since you already have good chops/speed!) š I know that you missed a few chord-changes with your line-resolutions, but it was a “first-take-improvisation” as you said, so that’s bound to happen until you get awesome at it (I think this is one of the hardest parts of improvisation – The jazzier the changes, the harder the improv. IMHO!) š®
Keep up the good work though! š
~Bill Meehan~ š