My entry to "shred this" competition

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    • August 15, 2009 at 8:02 pm
    Sean Conklin
    Sean Conklin
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    Hey man,

    Great submission! You’ve got some really tasty improv and phrasing in there. Only critique I’d have is to implement a recurring melodic theme amidst the improv. You started out with one, and it would have been cool if you resolved back to it at some point. Just my opinion though, great job!

    Welcome to IG and see you around,
    Sean

    • August 15, 2009 at 8:12 pm
    johnyprestige
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    thanks for the kind words, yeah your probably right… i can see how it might get boring without at least a little repetition, thanks for the crit and for the welcome:) next time i shall make a theme:)

    • October 20, 2009 at 1:59 am
    burnedoutgolfer
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    Great phrasing, tremelo work, and sweep technique! I hope to get to your level one day! My entry cant even be compared with that! Keep up with great playing! Really enjoyed it!
    -SLOTH

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