Awesome! š I love hearing people’s takes on my lessons. Great job man. Definitely keep working at it!
One thing I’d recommend is doing a lot of practice without the backing also, and concentrating on the techniques slowly so you can work on the technique’s execution as well as the sound. For example, your palm muting could use a lot more definition, especially since we’re dealing with metal. š Make sure when you practice you can hear a clear differentiation between the notes that are palm muted and the notes that are played normally. It’s best to work on that kind of stuff slowly at first so you can work on each hand individually and what they each need to do to accomplish crisp, clear palm muting.
Sounding great though man. Would love to hear an updated version sometime. Thanks for sharing!