Original instrumental

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    • April 8, 2011 at 10:49 am
    pikman
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    here is a tune i wrote last year,i call it “web of confusion”…..hope you enjoy it….feedback always welcome.negative or positive…it’s all good….

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    • April 8, 2011 at 6:44 pm
    DistortedDiggaz
    Member

    I think it doesn’t have enough catch to be an instrumental. I think it sounded too much like an improv solo over most of the song if you get what I mean?
    Sounded cool. I think you should get one phrase that you like, stick it in, repeat it, but with melodic or rhythmic differences to make it sound different and then have a different part where you can go nuts with the solo, then finish with a different phrase.
    I did enjoy thel listen though. I think the drums sounded cool too.

    • April 8, 2011 at 9:45 pm
    pikman
    Member

    right on dude,that is cool.that is basically what it is…an improv solo with many parts….thanks for your constructive criticism……at least you are honest.

    • April 9, 2011 at 4:06 pm
    DistortedDiggaz
    Member

    šŸ˜€ You’re welcome. As I said, I did really like it. The tone is really quite cool too. Too much gain in parts, but in the first minute, I like most of the tone. šŸ˜€
    What you using to get that tone?

    • April 9, 2011 at 4:07 pm
    DistortedDiggaz
    Member

    sorry for double post, but just remembered. I think it’s got a ‘halloween’ feel to it from 2:10 šŸ˜€

    • April 9, 2011 at 6:03 pm
    pikman
    Member

    that is halloween at the end there.the beginning tone i am using studio devil pro….

    • April 9, 2011 at 6:19 pm
    DistortedDiggaz
    Member

    ah right. hought it sounded familiar

    • April 10, 2011 at 9:29 am
    Sean Conklin
    Sean Conklin
    Member

    Cool stuff man! I liked it, some great playing and ideas in there. Like DistortedDiggaz said, it could be more polished structure-wise. However maybe you don’t want it too polished with a name like “Web of Confusion”. šŸ˜Ž Good stuff man, thanks for sharing.

    • April 10, 2011 at 1:35 pm
    pikman
    Member

    thank you Sean,i really appreciate you comment,by the way man killer lessons you have bro.really enjoying them….thanks…..

    • April 12, 2011 at 2:43 pm
    JBGuitar
    Member

    Nice riffin’ and playing man- I echo what the others said if you intend to polish and refine- but as it stands right now- some very cool playing and a really fun listen! Cheers and post up some more! m/

    • April 13, 2011 at 10:27 am
    pikman
    Member

    thank you dude!

    • April 14, 2011 at 10:11 am
    pikman
    Member

    thank you bro, i really appreciate that…..

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